Flash Fiction: Summer’s Day

 

Flash fiction is always a challenge because it is not just creating a readable, enjoyable story, but it is doing so with very few words.  With limited time to get the message across, each and every word choice and sentence takes on a whole new level of importance.  That is not to say that when crafting a longer story each and every word and sentence isn’t carefully scrutinized and fine-tuned, but with flash fiction the process is more akin to writing poetry, where hours are spent pouring over each and every choice to see if there is anything that needs adjustment.  With that level of pressure, it adds and even more difficulty when attempting to create a twist ending, however I feel that it was well worth the effort with Summer’s Day. – Eric Bonholtzer

 

Summer’s Day

 Summer was burning the ashes, watching intently as every trace of her boyfriend’s favorite blue shirt disappeared into the smoldering fire of burning leaves.  She thought about just how much her boyfriend loved that shirt, and smiled a little, the engraved brass buttons the only thing she ever liked about it. She watched the tendrils of smoke as they wafted on the breeze, carrying away all the bitter memories of her former flame. She felt relieved, cathartic, as if now everything could be alright, as if this was the final symbol of letting go.  She almost couldn’t believe it was over, the years she’d lived in her ex’s shadow.  In the light of the hot autumn day when so many people were incinerating their piles of dead leaves, Summer reached up and touched the tender bruise around her eye, still wincing at the pain.  It had taken unbelievable courage to finally get free, but Summer smiled, knowing that she was worth it.

As the fire subsided, she saw a glint amid the ash and shook her head, admonishing herself not to be so careless.  Picking through the charred remains, she retrieved the engraved buttons of her ex’s favorite shirt, and the bloodied teeth that had not succumbed to the fire, placing them in her pocket and preparing for the new day, knowing that he could never touch her again.

 

 

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Eric Bonholtzer is also civil litigation trial attorney in Pasadena, California and was voted a Pasadena Top Attorney for 2013.
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About Eric Bonholtzer

Eric Bonholtzer’s work has appeared in numerous publications. He is a USC graduate with a Master's Degree in English from the California State Polytechnic University, Pomona. Eric has received numerous awards for his writing including taking first place in the fiction and poetry categories of the College Language Association Creative Writing Contest as well as receiving the Ted Pugh Poetry Award. His short story collection, The Skeleton’s Closet, is available at Amazon.com, Bn.com, and other retailers. His poetry book, Remnants & Shadows, is also available. Eric’s work has appeared in many anthologies and he is a regular contributor to several national magazines. In addition to writing, Eric is also a successful civil litigation trial attorney.